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Sunday, 31 July 2011

Personification Poems

Room 6 has been learning about personification. Personification is when an inanimate object is given human charateristics e.g. "The thunder yelled a warning to all the people below". We wrote poems using personification to describe an inanimate object. Here are some of our poems:


The Moon

It is night.
The moon waits until the sun goes down so that he can speed across
the sky to find the waiting sun.
They swap places in the pitch black sky.
He checks on all of the children with his beady eyes.
He smiles because he knows that they are all sound asleep.

By Megan M.


A Cloudy Poem

The clouds wake up in the morning,
Taking over the sky by stretching out wide.
Trying to hide the sun.
Playing with each other, joining together, moving shape.
Flying around carelessly, floating wonderfully in the sky.
When the sun goes down they bounce around with their friends the stars.
"Oh how I wish I could fly like cloud !"

By Megan D.

6 comments:

  1. I like it. It reminds me a bit of a Winnie the Pooh poems about clouds.

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  2. Amazing word pictures, Megan. I love reading high quality writing. Keep up the great work!

    Mrs Steel

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  3. wish i can write like that and awesome poem!

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  4. those poems are amazing i love them all!!!

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  5. tht was really good

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  6. I really like that peom
    I wish that I could make up one like that
    I love❤️πŸ’–πŸ’―
    Make another one like thatπŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ’―πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜❤️πŸ’œπŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’›πŸ§‘

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